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FA: Mabel Pines - Gravity Falls by AmaiKieseki-San FA: Mabel Pines - Gravity Falls by AmaiKieseki-San
Mabel Pines from Gravity Falls.
She is SO CUTE OMG!!!!!!! I'm sick so i thought i would draw her today~

Please critque v.v but understand to me this is the peice of art i made so be gentle. :)

EDIT/same day/
GUYS!!! 26 FAVS IN A DAY??
AND CRITUQE??????
WOW
EDIT/6th/
SHIT
36 VEWIS??????
guess who's drawing more gravity falls... dippy next XD

Art (c) :iconamaikieseki-san:
Gravity Falls (c) Disney
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This is a wonderful piece of art work! I love how you drew Mabel in your own style, instead of like me, I use the show's style! But besides that, it's really wonderful!
Though, I know you could have done better on the line art, it looks a little messy, I guess it's just only me.
The shade is a little weird, it doesn't really look good. The eyes look really good! It's shiny, dark, and bold! It have everything that an Anime eye should have. Also, I think the blush on her face shouldn't have black surrounding it...it looks weird. Though, the background needs a lot of work, i'm not really sure if the sky colors look really like a sky... XD Or the grass.
So, I hope this was good enough.
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She looks cute. I like her pose and the angle of her head.
The hair looks magnificent, I like how you did it.
The lines are thick, and could be thinner.
The shading is minimal, but still looks good. I like how you shaded her face.

Her eyes looks good. I like that you've made the pupil so large, and has put a gradient on it :dance:

I have some advices for you, since you've wanted to improve.
First off, you can search for anime eye tutorials here on dA, but since there's much anime in general, it's a good idea to type tutorial first, like "Tutorial anime eye"
Here's a few sites I found that way:
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[link] (male manga eyes)

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As a little detail, perhaps you could draw the white of the eye, and put some colour variations to the iris.

Hope this helps
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:icondakotacowgirl2012:
Dakotacowgirl2012 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student General Artist
I Love dipper!
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:iconamaikieseki-san:
AmaiKieseki-San Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me to!!! I cant wait to draw him!!! %uFF08%uFF3E%u2207%uFF3E%uFF09
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:icondakotacowgirl2012:
Dakotacowgirl2012 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Student General Artist
He's so amazing
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TheSirKnite Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
That's awesome.
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:iconamaikieseki-san:
AmaiKieseki-San Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks <3
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:iconthesirknite:
TheSirKnite Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
You're welcome.
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:iconmununga11:
Mununga11 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Adorbs~!
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:iconamaikieseki-san:
AmaiKieseki-San Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks
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Mununga11 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Welcome~~
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RellChu Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconlaplz: SOO CUTEE!!!!!!
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